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Re: I Am A Bit Pretentious (By Lavender)
Wow. Short, sweet, and to the point! I think this poem conveys a real sense of swiftness. I dig it. I LOVED the line "but oh my aethest God I'm ...
Apr 27 -
Re: Sharp as Steel -- Prologue
Hi!! I loved the way you showed, and didn't tell here! I know that's old generic writing advice, but I do think you have got something here that is WONDERFUL ...
Apr 27 -
Re: I LOVE LIFE!!! (By Jasmine)
Hii!!! I loved the message of this poem sooo much!!! I really appreciate it when poems ryme old school, carry a positive message, and (my favorite) use natural imagerey!!! I ...
Apr 5 -
Re: The Merge Anthology TRANSFORMERS fanfiction: A ghost in the Machine (STORY 1)
I am flabberghasted. This is so good!!!! Geniunely, other than a few grammar notes, I think this is wonderful. I loved how you described megatron, soundwave, achrachnid. However, i got ...
Mar 19 -
Re: 3 AM
this is so spooky!!! I loved the mystery you incorporated throughout this! However some critisisms: maybe add more to do? Like, if someone clicks on something divulging from the main ...
Mar 19