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I really really enjoyed this. The rhyme scheme and flow were excellent. The only part that seems to stick out a bit to me though is: " 'Dreams?' you ask. ...

I understand this feeling completely as I had to deal with a bout of depression myself. It was terribly hard and you do put it well. I feel like someone ...

Hi! So I liked the first 2 verses, but I feel like it loses focus as it goes on. It does become a bit rant-y as someone below me mentioned. ...

I personally like that you capitalized Mine and My. It adds to the deep feeling of attachment and tone of the poem. Quite lovely, simple but really well done.