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Re: Dear world,
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Feb 8, 2016
nd welcome to YWS!) This is a very nice story! Your concluding sentence left a huge impact on me, and other readers as well, I'm sure. Anyway, on to the ... -
Re: Lunch Money
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Feb 8, 2016
nd welcome to YWS!) This is a very nice story! Your concluding sentence left a huge impact on me, and other readers as well, I'm sure. Anyway, on to the ... -
Re: Chapter 1
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Jan 8, 2016
I am really liking where this story is going. It kept my attention the whole time I was reading which is always an important thing and you only had a ... -
Re: Like the Back of My Hand
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Dec 7, 2015
I have edited all the spelling and hopefully all the punctuation mistakes. I have combined some of the sentences into a way that makes it read a bit better. Now ... -
Re: Fight For Sunlight
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Oct 2, 2015
Like I said, I'm just going through your poems to see what you've got up. Alright, so this review is just going to be a basic thing because I'm going ... -
Re: The Confused Little Fellow
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Oct 1, 2015
Everyone stood uncomfortably. “Ben, I can help with your nose,” Noah said quietly. Ben nodded. “Thanks,” I followed them to the medical quadrant where Noah managed to stop the bleeding. ... -
Re: to be
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Oct 1, 2015
Not a whole lot I can say about this, but if I were to say something, you made a nice story in a nice number of lines. It makes me ... -
Re: Worlds Collide (Part 2)
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Jul 2, 2015
Life is beautiful and yet life is not a bed of roses. Though it is full of ups and downs it has many facets of blessings and successes. To some ... -
Re: Guardians
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Jul 2, 2015
-Grammar, for one. There were a few times I think you probably just got a little too excited and forgot to capitalize a word or two, which happens to all ... -
Re: Hexamon ~ 2
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Jul 2, 2015
-Grammar, for one. There were a few times I think you probably just got a little too excited and forgot to capitalize a word or two, which happens to all ... -
Re: Alien with Ivory
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Jun 29, 2015
he four vampires congregated around the fireplace that was now lit to give the room a more homely feel. Caius’ tall, pale physique leaned against the mantelpiece in front of ... -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 25
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Jun 29, 2015
The below story is flawless He four vampires congregated around the fireplace that was now lit to give the room a more homely feel. Caius’ tall, pale physique leaned against ... -
Re: Family History Repeats Itself
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Jun 29, 2015
So I really did like the idea behind this poem but it was still really weird. For one I felt like you were trying too hard with some of the ...
