SASSYLADY333

Just so you know, story from the beginning up in Fan Fiction. If anyone is interested lol

Thanks! Yup friends* ahahaha :)

Thank you! But I do wonder if you liked it...*Sucker for compliments* or disliked it. I'll use the correction you have provided :)

Reviews please...lol I will post more of this even if I do have a lack of responses. I am mainly posting on a fan site if anyone is interested in ...

No it is not a poem. But my teacher liked it very much he gave me five extra points, I just wanted to a real opinion. Thank you. p.s.- The ...

I think maybe you should put spaces in between your paragraphs! It would be a alot easier to read. I have to go but when I return expect more feedback! ...

Whoops! I might have mentioned this is an expert from my fan-fiction.[ Roughly a hundred pages long, but going under some major revisions] Which is acutally pretty long, I mean ...

Yeah, well I said it wasn't a poem yet... But thank you.

The age old battle! But I do admit I wasn't very creative, I rushed to express myself. But I'm glad you could relate, thanks :)

Thank you! I couldn't have gotten a better review on my birthday :)

Thank you! :)

[Finally someone with structure!] Ahem, anyway I liked this very much! :) Kind of reminds me of a story i was writing...

So this is really good! Just two things! 1. Spelling, im a horrible speller lol 2. Structure! i think you need more stanza's!!!

Thanks! :)

Well here's part three, if my other post confuses anyone! tehe ;)