SASSYLADY333

I thought it was really good. But the very last line i found confusing."Spare my feelings from a hurtful lot" I think after a bit more editing it would be ...

I liked it and my poem that i posted...inspired from Shakespeare!!! But no really, be orginal write from the heart, and find your tone for each poem if you didn't ...

amber i loved it!!! but like the person before me said add more detail!! i found it very engaging and it was fun to read. it has a tone thats ...

OK I READ THIS YESTERDAY AND I COULDN'T SIGN ON TO REPLY!!! BUT I READ IT BEFORE , SO I AGREE WITH MOST OF THE ADVICE BUT I THINK IT ...

Um...well the person before me, pretty much said it all. :). About the grammar i mean. And i really liked it and i can't wait to see more...;).

I think it has good potiential but you didn't give us enough. I think you should add more details, because even though this is the beginning I don't think it's ...

Well, I liked it. I could hear the beat with your words! Not that I know much about Lyric poetry, but in my opinion it was good. Just to be ...

I liked it, maybe just add a little more orginality. But honeslty i thought it was great, and maybe add some more stuff about " yesterday". Good song, ;).

Well, noticed you had no reviews, so I'm doing the pleasure. Loved it, I think it's a good story. Just make your story a little clearer, like at first I ...

I loved it, you were good with your words and descriptions! And the story has an easy and mysterious flow that leaves the reader wanting more. Loved it! One point: ...

Well friend you seem to go into a lot of detail in your stories and include things that are unnesscary. Maybe focus more on keeping the readers attention Amber, but ...

Hey loved! Very promising, good plot so far and description. At first i didn't know if I would like it , but really i loved it. Hope you get more ...

I agree with emooly it's not the style in which i could right. But it makes me appricaite the poem all the better. Loved it, it was long though, in ...

I really liked this poem, it was really enjoyable. As a reader i was pulled in, which is a lot to say about a poem a page long. I think ...

Good story! Well you reviewed mine, just returning the favor. I like it, the dialogue is interesting, reminds me of a story I'm working on. I love how diffrent it ...