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Re: Awake Part 4
Hello again, To be honest I didn't see a single mistake in this chapter. Good Job! I really like how your story has turned out so far. It has been ...
Aug 31, 2013 -
Re: Awake Part 3
Hello again :). Chapter 3 is pretty good. I'm still not seeing many-if any- typos. Actually I don't think I noticed in any this time around. Good job! I like ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: Awake Part 2
Hello again, I think I enjoy this chapter as much as I did on the first! I noticed a typo on Bryn's story though. You put "me" instead of "be". ...
Aug 30, 2013 -
Re: Awake Part 1
Hello :). I want to start off saying this was a very impressive first chapter! I was pretty much hooked from the first few chapters. I'm really curious about the ...
Aug 29, 2013 -
Re: But In The End...We All Wish For Death (Chapter One)
Hello again :) I love the way you spell things in your stories and poems!!! I'd never before seen Vampyr spelled like this but it makes it really unique :). ...
Aug 7, 2013 -
Re: The Shadowed Pack- Prologue & Chapter 1
Hello :). I just wanted to start off by saying I enjoyed reading this first chapter. My little sister adores were-wolves so I think she would love to read this ...
Aug 6, 2013 -
Re: A Faery Seduction
Hello :). First off I LOVE that you spelled faery the way you did. Nice to see I'm not the only one who does this lol. I'd like to tell ...
Aug 5, 2013 -
Re: Human Heart with a Garnish to Top
Hello :) I want to start off by saying wow! I must say I really enjoyed this story. I don't know much about writing, but I don't see many mistakes ...
Aug 4, 2013 -
Re: Cocaine Rush
Hi there. I really enjoyed reading this poem. I like the imagery you used for it, it made me think of a can of Coca-Cola was going to appear on ...
Aug 2, 2013