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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Culture Re: creativity

    I love the repetition of the word creativity throughout the poem. I love how it expands the idea of creativity throughout the poem. There are some mistakes I noticed in ...

    Oct 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Finding the Pen Again

    I have been through this kind of stuff. And it's really, really weird. I just can't write the same way I used to write before, then I completely abandoned my ...

    Oct 28, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Watchman

    I love your interpretation on that bible verse. I like how you described how you described being one of God's "watchmen". But I think, these conditions that we must be ...

    Oct 28, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: No More Knowledge

    So, you did your assignment of doing this 'found poem' only using words from another book? That's awesome! I wish my assignments were somehow like that, it'll be so cooler. ...

    Oct 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: They see, I see

    This was a great poem, I must say. First of all, I like the whole theme, which is abuse. And I can somehow relate to it. I could relate to ...

    Oct 28, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: On Sylvia's Grave.

    This was a little bit too deep, but I really love it. This: "Like she died, Like I will die. Like we all die." gave me a bit of an ...

    Oct 28, 2015


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