Rydia

First off, whoo for dystopian societies! They're a great base for any sci fi story and I think there's some interesting stuff going on here. Like Griff, though, I thought ...

Hmmm. I think I'll review this as if it were a song since that's how you intended it and it makes a lot of difference rhythm-wise. If this was poetry, ...

Hey Eli! Alright, so I like some of what you have here and it's not a bad piece of flash fiction, but I struggle somewhat to find enough of interest ...

Hmmm. I have to disagree with your fan club and side with you on this one :p Maybe 'worst' is too harsh a word but yeah, it's not too good. ...

Hiya! Alright so I do review novels (see I'm doing it now :p) but I'd rather start from the beginning than jump in at a random chapter. So. I'm just ...

Hiya! Alright so I do review novels but at a slower rate so you'll only get a review once a week at the most. But as long as you don't ...

There is always time for friends and poetry :) A good poem you have here and don't worry, I could tell it was about love as well as freckles. It's ...

There is always time for friends, my dear, particularly when that includes reviewing poetry. Yum! Let's see what you have here then... Ah interesting. There's some great name dropping going ...

Hello there! I haven't read the other reviews so my apologies if I repeat anything. I shall also apologise for being here at all since it means I found your ...

You ought to proof-read your work more carefully because it's a shame that so many mistakes should ruin this piece. There's a good plot going on here and some interesting ...

Hi! So I'm not quite sure what to make of this but since you've requested the review, I'll try my best to understand it. Here's some specific comments first: I ...

Hi there! Alright so this is a little short and your reptition of 'shadowy' wasn't particularly effective, but I did like a few of the ideas you came up with. ...

Ah now this poem is much more to my liking, dear. You have strong images, a clear context and there's some really lovely lines and a great use of repetition, ...

Hello there! I won't review this in detail since it's an old poem and sentimental at that. I'm sure you've grown and developed as a writer anyway so I'll just ...

Hello there! You don't seem to have many reviews which is a shame because this is quite nice so let's see if I can correct this ;) First off, a ...