Rydia

Haiii! I'm back for another chapter :D Awkward Sentences A few pieces of awkward phrasing here and there so I thought I'd pick some out and give you a few ...

Hai! First off, let me say that I love the tone you've got here. There's a certain relentless feel to it that just builds beautifully as the poem goes on ...

Hi! What an interesting idea for a poem. I'm not sure that it's the most marketable, but hey, what a fun idea! Line-By-Line Title: It needs fixing! I guess it's ...

Haiii! I'm sorry it's taken me so long to get to this! I had it on my list to do sooner but then the holidays got really crazy for me ...

Oooh final part, exciting! :D Specifics 1. Uh... isn't he already in Mike's seat? I mean, he was hitting the gas in the last episode so he must have moved ...

Part nine! Specifics 1. They're going to waste time moving the bodies? Really? I thought they wanted to go jump in the truck nice and quick, why not just make ...

Remember me? You quite possibly don't actually, what with it having been forever since I've been here :p But I might actually finish eviewing this today, wouldn't that be cool? ...

Hai! Looks like you need a review :D (and I'm avoiding work so hey, why not?) First thing's first, your title could use some improvement. It's not very original and ...

Hi! It looked like you needed more feedback so I thought I'd stop by and leave you a review :) Title: Okay so the first stop is the title which ...

Hi AJ! Okay so I decided to tackle this one next :) My first criticism is where's the punctuation? Just because it's lyrics, that doesn't mean you can't get lazy ...

Hi again! Here I am to review the next part :) Line-By-Line 1. Line 8: Got cha should be one word. 2. Line 9: Whats should be What's. 3. I'm ...

Hai! Okay so I should be working now, just so you know, but I likes me some poetry which means I'm going to review this instead ^^ Title: It's cute, ...

Hai! Sorry its taken me so long to get to this, but here I am so let's see what you've got! Oh, by the way, I'm going to go ahead ...

I'll make points as I come to them so this is all in chronological order which should help you find the parts I'm talking about! Over-state Articles are always more ...

You do realise the points are coming back, don't you? O.o Along with blogs, full profiles and everything else that is currently missing. I'm going to hold back on answering ...