Rydia

Lyrics! Okay so it's been a while since I've touched this forum, but here I am to give it (and you) some love! Specifics 1. The second line is a ...

Oh I love the rhythm of this! I haven't even had time to think about what I'm looking at before you're diving right in there, very nice! I guess I ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! I shall be your reviewer today because I say so; hope you're liking the site so far. Specifics 1. Prose vs Poetry At the moment, ...

Hello there and welcome to the site! It looks like you could use a review ;) Specifics 1. I wonder if you couldn't expand that beginning a little? Maybe start ...

Hello! It's a prologue, how snazzy. I always fail at writing these so I have a tendency to scrap it and start at chapter one. Let's see if you're better ...

Hi there, welcome to YWS! It's a pleasure to meet you and I hope you're finding the site fun and useful so far :D Specifics 1. The first line is ...

Auxi! Can I call you that? It's so easy to call you that after reading your novel, speaking of which, I still need to get to chapter eight! But because ...

Hello! Title Can I take your uncertainty as a request for help? Don't use Valentine's song! It's very cheesy and obvious and instead, let me help you think of something ...

Hello! I love me some poetry so how could I resist reviewing this? (Oh look I rhymed! Don't mind me, I am very easily amused today). Specifics 1. What's that ...

Hello Hannah! Specifics 1. Line two bothers me. It's partly the repetition on line three. There are two ways to use repetition that I will accept. One, you repeat the ...

Hello! I am here to review again :D Specifics 1. (which are really the same thing) I'm loving the changes you've made to stanza one but I'm going to suggest ...

Hello there! I can't believe this hasn't received any reviews, well not to worry, I am here to fix that! Let's have a closer look, shall we? Specifics 1. The ...

Hello! The link isn't working for me, but that's okay as I know what slam poetry is and I've been to a few gigs. Can you call them gigs? I ...

Hello there! I am here to review :) Specifics 1. Title I have to be honest and say I don't like it. I've heard the phrase before and it doesn't ...

Hello! Let's have a look at what you've got here, shall we? Specifics 1. The first line is wonderful, though I'd suggest flipping the with and not around so it ...