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Re: cosmetic constellations
Specifics 1. I love the alliteration of bandit of the beautiful, though I'm not one hundred percent sure what it means. I guess that she steals beauty or beautiful people? ...
Sep 30, 2017 -
Re: Rainbow
Hi! I'm going to start with some comments as I read through and then try to give you my overall thoughts at the end. Specifics 1. Okay so it looks ...
Sep 30, 2017 -
Re: The little things
Hi, I thought I'd write a quick review for this as well, while I'm browsing your portfolio. I've still got to do 6 more to win RevMo so thanks for ...
Sep 30, 2017 -
Re: Inequality Has No Justice
Hi! So this has been on my review list for a while and it's about time I got round to it... Specifics 1. My parents were always busy, so naturally ...
Sep 30, 2017 -
Re: Women Borne of Oceans
Hi! Specifics 1. Your title caught my attention so nice choice there and I like that you jump straight into the sea imagery. You could maybe drop the 'like' in ...
Sep 29, 2017 -
Re: A Clock (extended)
Hi! I've not reviewed much poetry lately so I decided to browse around these forums a little. I'm going to give you my thoughts as I read through and then ...
Sep 29, 2017 -
Re: Porcelain Doll
Hi! I thought I'd take a look at this - I'll make comments as I read through and then try to give more general advice at the end. Specifics 1. ...
Sep 29, 2017 -
Re: Deleted 87
So! I've reached the last of these already but I'll explain anyway. I was hoping to check in with my SB Crew kids this month and then between NaNo and ...
Sep 28, 2017 -
Re: The Witnesses of Time: Prologue
Hi! So I've not been around as much as I'd have liked to this month and I've been hoping to get a chance to check in with my SB crew ...
Sep 28, 2017 -
Re: Shattered Souls: Chapter 1
Hi! So I've been wanting to actually check in with you and the rest of the SB crew and just not finding the time and since I'm behind on RevMo ...
Sep 27, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 4.3
Hi! So I'm not around much lately and I don't get enough time to just check in with my crew-mates and see how you guys are doing and I wanted ...
Sep 27, 2017 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Eight, Part Four - The End of a Very Long Exposition
Hi! So I'm very guilty at the moment of not checking in with my SB crew often enough and asking how you're doing and I was hoping to change that ...
Sep 26, 2017 -
Re: The Mahogany Piano
Hi Sheytato! So I've been feeling particularly annoyed with myself recently for not touching base with my crew-mates more often and I really wanted to change that this month but ...
Sep 26, 2017 -
Re: Harbingers of Revolution: Quarantine 1.1 - The Oncoming Storm
Hello! So I'm feeling like I don't get to talk to my crew-mates enough and I wanted to make a change to that this month but with RevMo and house ...
Sep 25, 2017 -
Re: neverland
Next on Storybook Station! Hai, I'm feeling like I don't touch base with you guys enough and I'm trying to balance that with catching up on reviews and storybook posts ...
Sep 25, 2017
