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Rydia

Rydia

  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: cosmetic constellations

    Specifics 1. I love the alliteration of bandit of the beautiful, though I'm not one hundred percent sure what it means. I guess that she steals beauty or beautiful people? ...

    Sep 30, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Rainbow

    Hi! I'm going to start with some comments as I read through and then try to give you my overall thoughts at the end. Specifics 1. Okay so it looks ...

    Sep 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The little things

    Hi, I thought I'd write a quick review for this as well, while I'm browsing your portfolio. I've still got to do 6 more to win RevMo so thanks for ...

    Sep 30, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Other Re: Inequality Has No Justice

    Hi! So this has been on my review list for a while and it's about time I got round to it... Specifics 1. My parents were always busy, so naturally ...

    Sep 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Women Borne of Oceans

    Hi! Specifics 1. Your title caught my attention so nice choice there and I like that you jump straight into the sea imagery. You could maybe drop the 'like' in ...

    Sep 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: A Clock (extended)

    Hi! I've not reviewed much poetry lately so I decided to browse around these forums a little. I'm going to give you my thoughts as I read through and then ...

    Sep 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Porcelain Doll

    Hi! I thought I'd take a look at this - I'll make comments as I read through and then try to give more general advice at the end. Specifics 1. ...

    Sep 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Deleted 87

    So! I've reached the last of these already but I'll explain anyway. I was hoping to check in with my SB Crew kids this month and then between NaNo and ...

    Sep 28, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Witnesses of Time: Prologue

    Hi! So I've not been around as much as I'd have liked to this month and I've been hoping to get a chance to check in with my SB crew ...

    Sep 28, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Shattered Souls: Chapter 1

    Hi! So I've been wanting to actually check in with you and the rest of the SB crew and just not finding the time and since I'm behind on RevMo ...

    Sep 27, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Chapter 4.3

    Hi! So I'm not around much lately and I don't get enough time to just check in with my crew-mates and see how you guys are doing and I wanted ...

    Sep 27, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Eight, Part Four - The End of a Very Long Exposition

    Hi! So I'm very guilty at the moment of not checking in with my SB crew often enough and asking how you're doing and I was hoping to change that ...

    Sep 26, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Mahogany Piano

    Hi Sheytato! So I've been feeling particularly annoyed with myself recently for not touching base with my crew-mates more often and I really wanted to change that this month but ...

    Sep 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Technology Re: Harbingers of Revolution: Quarantine 1.1 - The Oncoming Storm

    Hello! So I'm feeling like I don't get to talk to my crew-mates enough and I wanted to make a change to that this month but with RevMo and house ...

    Sep 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: neverland

    Next on Storybook Station! Hai, I'm feeling like I don't touch base with you guys enough and I'm trying to balance that with catching up on reviews and storybook posts ...

    Sep 25, 2017


“Can a magician kill a man by magic?” Lord Wellington asked Strange. Strange frowned. He seemed to dislike the question. “I suppose a magician might,” he admitted, “but a gentleman never could.”
— Susanna Clarke, Jonathan Strange & Mr Norrell