Rydia

Hey there :) Specifics 1. Has anyone ever said how hard it is to find evidence when the entire city is covered in snow? I think 'Has anyone ever told ...

Hi there,nice to meet you :) Specifics 1. He vividly remembered his hands getting tangled in her thick hair, her soft lips pressed to his, the feeling of her small ...

Apparently I get five points if I review this so here I am. Specifics 1. We run as frantically, hoping the guard won't notice us, and settle down, just in ...

Hullo! So I've not read the previous parts so if I say something which you think you've already covered, please feel free to ignore! Specifics 1. Everything always seemed more ...

Hullo! Specifics 1. Chaos. Blood rained down from everywhere, seemingly out of nowhere. Only it wasn’t nowhere; it was coming from the two fighting armies above. This isn't very dramatic ...

Hullo! I've not read the previous parts so please take this review with a grain of salt. Specifics 1. 45) The satirical ones among our pseudo society rummage from the ...

Hey there, welcome to YWS! Specifics 1. Loving the rhythm in this first stanza but I think you could drop the 'so' from the second line as it feels like ...

Hullo and welcome to the site! Line-by-line 1. I think you could have a more interesting title. There have probably been hundreds of poems called Broken and your title is ...

Hey there and welcome to YWS! Line-by-line 1. A darkness she desired,haunted her dreams, You're missing a space after that first comma. I also think this could be re-worded to ...

Hullo and welcome to the site! Line-by-Line 1. laying where they may. I'm not sure about this line, I think it could be more descriptive. I'm also not sure you ...

Hullo, welcome to the site! I'm going to try to give you some comments about each of the poems but in future you'd be better off posting one at a ...

Specifics 1. I don't have any...? Overall There are some nice sentiments/ philosophies in here that make me want to like Evian.Not enough to actually like like him but I ...

Only two more chapters before I've filled in the gaps. It seems a shame to give in now and it really is too early for a nap! Specifics 1. Why ...

I'm sleeeepy so I might have a nap after this one or you might just get one of my more sleep deprived reviews. Fair warning! Specifics 1. And so, for ...

Specifics 1. I think the box was described as smelling like boot polish in the last chapter but now it's the candles which have the overriding aroma? I may be ...