Rydia

Happy review day! Specifics 1. I'm not sure who the 'he' is in the first paragraph and that's because I've not read the previous chapters, but I feel it's worth ...

I love snow angels. Mostly I just love snow but yeah, there's something about it that makes you want to lay down in it and while you're there, you might ...

Happy review day! Specifics 1. My feet seem to sink into the earth as i I walk. It’s like something is grabbing hold of my feet each time I step ...

Hey there ^^ Specifics 1. "Look, I think we should give up. I hate to down your hopes, Sammy, but maybe you haven't inherited your mom's power. Whatever we're looking ...

Happy review day! Specifics 1. I take a deep breath and open the door to face the person responsible for my birth and the person who I am responsible for. ...

So I just realised that's all the chapters for now and I should go find something else in the green room but since I said on to the next one, ...

Specifics 1. Rage is too weak of a word. Less is more when you're going for the short sentence big impact approach. 2. Surely Martin can already smell the gum ...

Hello again! Specifics 1. Do they need to pay to use this bus or have passes? I feel like if Willow really is that distracted, maybe we need a description ...

Specifics 1. The first sentence feels a bit telling - how has he just purchased it? Remotely by phone or just before getting on the bus? Maybe we could hear ...

Specifics 1. Martin has a hunch she is right, but he chooses to remain vague and shrugs. “We don’t share the same lunch hour. I have no idea what my ...

Guess who! Specifics 1. I love the first two sentences. Or rather the second sentence - that kind of statement is very funny and I was kind of wondering a ...

I need to do seven more reviews and you have a lot of chapters of this so it might be that you'll see more of me... Specifics 1. It feels ...

Hello again! Specifics 1. “That takes effort,” Willow replies, sticking out her lower lip, almost in a pout. Her backpack she squeezes closer to her chest, and she leans her ...

So I saw this in the green room and the title intrigued me and I'm here to take a look! Specifics 1. “Well, that explains where he got it from.” ...

Next chapter! Specifics 1. When I reappear, hair combed, sweat and dirt wiped away, and clad in a dress, she nods to me. Breakfast arrives, and though it’s chilly, the ...