Rydia

Hey there! Okay so you've titled this as a Monologue which means it should probably be in Other unless it's a Monologue within a script? I'm not sure about that ...

Did you copy and paste? That can occasionally cause problems or you might want to check which format you have selected

Frederick and I entered through the middle of the great hall to the sound of much applause. My eyes wondered wandered around the beautifully decorated room with red rose clusters ...

“To your father, inheritance had nothing to do with whether you were male or female. You have not received anything because your his will has been tampered with.” “What do ...

I entered the library to see the slim and gray haired man that was my uncle sitting behind his desk, fingers clasped together and a look of worry on his ...

My apologies for the delay, it's essay month and a little hectic ^^ Woe is me, I'm the down trodden character who everyone is mean to... Okay so I'd first ...

Hey! I shall start with a quick line by line and then give you some general advice :) Of Loss and Love: chapter one “I’m sorry, Princess.” I looked away ...

Heya! I'll head straight into a line by line and then add some closing points :) Also I'm going to presume you wanted to write in past tense as the ...

You never cease to amaze me. I considered sending this in a pm as I'm afraid I have nothing to offer but praise except I suppose that can be constructive ...

Hey there! I'm going to mostly pick out lines and comment because that always feels like the easiest way to review poetry but I'll try to give you a few ...

Heya! So this is the edited version which means I'm not going to read the previous reviews and if I repeat what has been said before it will just tell ...

Romantic Fiction, oh dear XD I don't claim to be any good in this genre but I'll help where I can and I think I might have a few tips ...

Ah this is an excellent improvement, you've come really far from your original poem and I think the only extra insight I could offer is that you should check your ...

Hey, sorry it took me a while to get back to you! There's some good improvements here but a few more suggestions: See this place where destruction rules, where winds ...

Well don't you have an interesting view of the site, huh? I like your spirit and what I'm hoping is your sense of humour ;) However, you've got a way ...