Rydia

Hey there! Cool poem you've got here, I love the imagery of the plastic flowers and the doll and I think that end rhyme works really well. However, I also ...

I love the title, thye theme and the halting, disapproving, steady tone. However, I felt your imagery was a little weak and your flow stiff. You can have the oppressive ...

Ah, you really shouldn't title your piece as an ode without researching! That's like calling a twenty line poem a Haiku just because you think the name sounds cool... With ...

Hello there! This isn't pitiful, it's actually quite good. There's some nice potential here :) A couple of scraps that need clearing away but you've got some great images and ...

I remember you were asking for reviews on this last night, in chat, so I thought, why not? And here I am! As the others have said, it has a ...

Oh my darling, beautiful as always. The flow is smooth and there's a haunting nature to it which fits perfectly with the theme and I love your choice of language ...

Hi, sorry for the delay on this! Mmmm, another poem to have a gander at. Let's see... Oh! I like this, quite a lot actually. I think you could have ...

Hi again! You've got some good internal thinking here and a few instances of really great description and attention to detail, like when you describe the boys playing out in ...

Hello there! Sorry its taken me so long to get to this, had a slightly hectic week :) Alright, well! I like this. There's some confusion as the others have ...

Hey there! A good story you've got here, some great plot going on and I love the tone you're writing with. It could use a clean up in a few ...

Hey there! I like the tone of this. Very graceful, very slow and a little distant; I like how it mimics the act of drowning, though I felt you didn't ...

Hey hey ^^ There's some powerful language here and in general I'm loving the writing style, it smarts of epic fantasy to me which is good because you're already setting ...

Hey there! First off, an interesting piece here. I've always loved mirror worlds and parallel universes so I found myself immediately at home here. I found the differing sexualities and, ...

Hey there! I've been seeing your name around quite a bit of late; it's a pleasure to meet you ^^ Alright then. Title. It's a bit of a mouthful but ...

Hello there! A pleasure to meet you :) This is a little rough around the edges huh? There's a nice touch of humour in there and something generally heart-warming about ...