Rydia

I'll come back to the audio recording in a little while but I wanted to give you some thoughts on the words themselves first while they're still fresh in my ...

Hello, here as requested! I'm going to start with pulling out things which grab my attention as I read through an then I'll talk more about general things like themes/ ...

Hi Elinor, here as promised! :) Specifics 1. She’d left high school not really knowing what she wanted to do with her life, and she’d just left college feeling just ...

Hi again! Specifics 1. They hadn’t made it two more steps when Jada was beside them. “If you can’t do stairs, I’m sure we have something free on the first ...

Hi! So I'm totally failing at reviewing this month but thought I'd get one in at least... Specifics 1. I'm not sure about 'genteelly rotting benches' as a description. That's ...

Second review! :) Specifics 1. Special assignment. Part of me wants Edna's son to be alive and on Redway's side/ Redway himself and part of me wants you to avoid ...

Well, I finished all the cakes but I expect you realise by now that I have given up altogether on making those 50 reviews. I feel I should at least ...

Reviews: 4/10 Cakes: Half a cheesecake and some other cakes in the oven Specifics 1. The reference to planes is odd. Like, I don't know if it's because they have ...

Reviews: 3/10 Cakes: Halfway on the cheesecake and about 20% progress through each of the other three Specifics 1. Why didn't Clem recognise the guard? I suppose she was also ...

Reviews: 2 Cakes: 0 Specifics 1. The chairs they’d been sitting in had fallen over, the arms cabinet too, and two of the windows had been smashed in. A small ...

Four? I think this was four, though it may well end up being number one for tomorrow if I don't finish before Claire is ready for a game... Specifics 1. ...

Three's a crowd? Also, my sister wants to play this game called league of legends and... yeah. I'm not going to make it to 7. So I'm going to have ...

Okay so if I'm serious about this review month thing (and I haven't decided yet that I'm not) then I need to do 8 chapters today and you should bug ...

Hi, thought I'd check this out :) Specifics 1. I think the first two lines of this could be more active. I like the first but the second could have ...

I think this is the final piece of yours I need to review and then I'm all caught up so you'll have to post something new! :) Specifics 1. The ...