Ryanator96

Wow! That hit hard for sure. I'm actually a little scared that that piece was "real" as you say... However, it was wonderfully well written and made its point well. ...

Hey, great story! This sounds like an incredible party! However, as another commenter mentioned, this does need some proof reading before you do anything else with it, so I'll help ...

Hey there, just a second, I need to mop up my brain, you just melted it. Okay, that's much better. I hope you're pleased that my mind is now just ...

Hey! Great story, so I don't really have to say much. I agree with bradybrady, the twist at the end is cool, but it is sort of up-in-the-air if you ...

Hey! Great to see a Max fanfiction on here! I absolutely loved the series when I read it a few years back, and I was happy to be reunited with ...

HAHAHAH! THanks for a good laugh, my friend ;) Great idea to incorporate humour into such a serious storyline, genius! All of the noticable mistakes and typos have already been ...

Hey Princess, love the piece! It's definitely a very strong and powerful selection, and I enjoyed every moment of it. I kind of partly agree with the other review on ...

Alright, I'm going to take a shot at reviewing this first, but before I do I just want to say this is one of my first poetry reviews, so forgive ...

... ....... ......YOU'RE TWELVE!!!!???? Wow! Just to start off, congrats and kudos and props and all of that great stuff for even talking your parents into joining this site (If ...

Hey man, I read the first few paragraphs here, and I like what I see, but I don't want to miss any suggestions I had to give, and I don't ...

Hey there, Loved the story for sure! I couldn't believe how realistic it was, espcially between the two brothers. Me and my brother sound the exact same way when we ...

Very impressive... I definitely liked it alot. This is my first day on this site and I had mixed expectations as to what I'd find, but you have obviously shown ...