Rurouni

I like it. Maybe you could desrcibe the town, what does it look like? How many people live there? Why don't you want to be like everyone else, then realize ...

This is awesome! I thought it was wonderful and orginal! I want you to continue so badly. I would put in the title about that cuss. Other than that its ...

I liked this! I think there were too many, super dupers. And you should describe her best friend, what does he looklike? Maybe more thoughts on how she feels about ...

I noticed you used "fallow" when its follow. And "wont" instead of won't. You used won't too many times. You should try haven't wouldn't nd other words of the sorts. ...