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Re: Waiting to Exhale
Good job. Keep up the good work.
Apr 5, 2008 -
Re: Dragon Bait 5
Just to let you know... Dragon Bait is a real book, SO you have to change the title no matter what. Well, im going back to read your story this ...
Apr 3, 2008 -
Re: She's So Perfect
Ummm not very romantic but u said more was coming soon soo im hoping to see the romantic part.
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: Dark Children
Yeah I agree it'll make a great book I just want to know more. Did the stars seriously vanish or was it all in the guys head. I love this ...
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: Strangers in the fog part 1
OK guys I made some chnages please read and review again. And read the other 3 i have out now. Thanks!
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: My Diary, M is for Monster
I'm soo sorry everyone. Most people were right i wasn't trying to be rude. I'm just a very harsh critquer and unlike yours, most diaries posted on here most are ...
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: The Gate of Glendon- Prologue
Back!!! I lay on my bed, this is in present tense...... choose the point of view as i have already stressed The guards beat me daily. Pain shot up my ...
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: Monty Python:After the Grail
I like it short and sweet Too bad King Arthur is in Jail according to the end seeing how the producers drunk away all of their money so to end ...
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: Heart Turns to Blue
I'm not quite sure how this would be sang. I've been trying to hum a tune for it that fits? fast slow? i cant quite get it right. And melody?
Mar 31, 2008 -
Re: Elior Series-Chapter 1 Remake
I like it I just dont think it makes much sense. Good luck i love the idea and i hope to see more.
Mar 31, 2008