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Re: Look, Ma
Wow. I really loved this poem. It's such an intrigiung and powerful idea of a neglected daughter? coming back to her mother to show how mothering should really be done. ...
May 12, 2011 -
Re: Are you rejecting me?
Also nothing like I expected, but I loved reading it. You can really imagine the man saying this and also the expression on the woman's face! Especially love the last ...
May 12, 2011 -
Re: nothing
This a beautiful, powerful poem. It's a very interesting idea of the girl realising she is in fact dead, kind of exciting and horrifying at the same time. Can I ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Small Encounter
OK, so I loved your poem because it was so intriguing. I still don't know what it's supposed to mean but here's what I got from it: (probably a long ...
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: The Promise
Hi! I'd firstly like to say that I loved your story and found it very touching. Like I think another reviewer said, at first I was skeptical and thoght it ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: A Demon In Disguise
I love this poem! I think it really describes temptation well and I could relate to all the feeling you talked about. It seems like you've really explored temptation in ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: Boogie Man
I think this is a truly incredible poem, very powerful and memorable. It was clever to use the character of the feared Boogie Man in this original way. The title ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Porcelain Doll
This is an amazing, dramatic poem. I honestly couldn't see where it was going (maybe just my lack of imagination) and I really like that in a story/poem. It wasn't ...
Jan 28, 2011 -
Re: A Serious Game of Hide and Seek
Hi, I've got to admit I'm new at YWS and this is my first review! So I''m sorry if it's not too flash. Anyway, congratulations on a great piece of ...
Jan 27, 2011
