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Thanks, Asher123. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Don't forget to click the "like" button up top. :D

Thanks niteowl! I feel so stupid lol I meant to put "fright" instead of "fight". And from does seem to fit better, thanks!

No problem! :D

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Thanks for your review, PancakeandWaffle. I'm glad you liked it! Don't forget to click the "like" button up top. (:

Thanks for your review. If you enjoyed it please click the "like" button. I am making more chapters to this but I guess I should have put it in a ...

Thank you for your review it was encouraging. Tafe and Kerrs are explained in the next part. I don't want to give to much away to my reader otherwise they'll ...

You're welcome :)

Ah, okay. Thanks!

Like you changed this: Zeight's hands shook, and her thigh burned. To this: Zeight's hands shook. Her thigh burned.

Thanks! :)

Hey, thank you so much for your review. It was very helpful but what I don't understand is why you made my two independent clauses joined by "and" and a ...

Thank you for your review. But don't say you liked it if you didn't otherwise you would have bothered to click the like button. God bless. Thanks again! :P

Thank you for your words of encouragement. If you liked this poem please click the "like" bottom at the top so other people know. :)

Okay, I'd be glad to take a look.