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RoyalHighness

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Violins

    *rhyme *scheme *concept *excruciating *preferred *destroys *elaborate

    Feb 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Prologue to the Teaser: Heavy

    Thank you! I'll try to be clearer about the time slot; I know it's hard to tell when there really aren't any clear signs. Thank you so much for writing ...

    Jun 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: Prologue to the Teaser: Heavy

    Thank you! I'll try to make those characters clearer. In my mind, they're so unique I could never mix them up but I never really thought about it from the ...

    Jun 30, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: Teaser: Untitled Novel: Chapter Something or Other

    I'm about to post a scene from the second chapter of the story, if you'd like to give your opinion on that, as well. Warning: it contains another character dump! ...

    Jun 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: Teaser: Untitled Novel: Chapter Something or Other

    Thank you for your awesome review! It's not often I get something so thoughtfully written. I'm working right now to break up that infodump, because honestly I didn't even notice ...

    Jun 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: Teaser: Untitled Novel: Chapter Something or Other

    Nah, the Compendium is just a rip off of 1984. My dad kept hounding me about writing that story for three years, but I only have like seventy rough drafts ...

    Jun 24, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: Teaser: Untitled Novel: Chapter Something or Other

    Thank you so, so much! I totally didn't even notice that thing about the pronouns, so thank you for that! I'll edit and re-post the new version. I'd been toying ...

    Jun 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dappled II: Bonfire

    The spacing of the first stanza was actually just a glitch I can't figure out how to fix, but wow, thank you so so much! This is easily the kindest ...

    Jun 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Lather III: The Sink Will Remember This

    Oh my goodness, I am so honored!! Thank you so much for your review, this really took me by surprise. I've made some changes along the same lines, but the ...

    May 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Cosmic Eulogy

    Thanks for the review! I've really been thinking about your suggestions, and I'm really trying to come up with some better imagery for my next few pieces. Thanks so much ...

    May 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Cosmic Eulogy

    I don't know, actually, I wrote this on the way to school one morning at a stop light and the title just sort of came to me. I think it ...

    May 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Lather II (Edited): Sink and Drain

    Thank you!! The lack of indent was a stylistic choice but not one that I had particular feelings about; it just kind of happened. I'm not sure what you mean ...

    May 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Lather

    Wow, I am floored that you took the time to write this to me! This is exactly the kind of criticism I was looking for! Thank you so much for ...

    May 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: A(r)mor

    I was trying to do a different take on the villanelle, but thank you! Yeah, I changed that line; I wasn't sure how I liked it anyway. Thanks for the ...

    Mar 22, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Scenery

    *checks* Hmm I could've sworn I saw it there, but it's gone now! >.< Either way, it deserves to be. I loved it, seriously, your diction's on point. (Also, agreed, ...

    Mar 20, 2015


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