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Re: Violins
*rhyme *scheme *concept *excruciating *preferred *destroys *elaborate
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: Prologue to the Teaser: Heavy
Thank you! I'll try to be clearer about the time slot; I know it's hard to tell when there really aren't any clear signs. Thank you so much for writing ...
Jun 30, 2015 -
Re: Prologue to the Teaser: Heavy
Thank you! I'll try to make those characters clearer. In my mind, they're so unique I could never mix them up but I never really thought about it from the ...
Jun 30, 2015 -
Re: Teaser: Untitled Novel: Chapter Something or Other
I'm about to post a scene from the second chapter of the story, if you'd like to give your opinion on that, as well. Warning: it contains another character dump! ...
Jun 26, 2015 -
Re: Teaser: Untitled Novel: Chapter Something or Other
Thank you for your awesome review! It's not often I get something so thoughtfully written. I'm working right now to break up that infodump, because honestly I didn't even notice ...
Jun 26, 2015 -
Re: Teaser: Untitled Novel: Chapter Something or Other
Nah, the Compendium is just a rip off of 1984. My dad kept hounding me about writing that story for three years, but I only have like seventy rough drafts ...
Jun 24, 2015 -
Re: Teaser: Untitled Novel: Chapter Something or Other
Thank you so, so much! I totally didn't even notice that thing about the pronouns, so thank you for that! I'll edit and re-post the new version. I'd been toying ...
Jun 23, 2015 -
Re: Dappled II: Bonfire
The spacing of the first stanza was actually just a glitch I can't figure out how to fix, but wow, thank you so so much! This is easily the kindest ...
Jun 11, 2015 -
Re: Lather III: The Sink Will Remember This
Oh my goodness, I am so honored!! Thank you so much for your review, this really took me by surprise. I've made some changes along the same lines, but the ...
May 7, 2015 -
Re: Cosmic Eulogy
Thanks for the review! I've really been thinking about your suggestions, and I'm really trying to come up with some better imagery for my next few pieces. Thanks so much ...
May 7, 2015 -
Re: Cosmic Eulogy
I don't know, actually, I wrote this on the way to school one morning at a stop light and the title just sort of came to me. I think it ...
May 4, 2015 -
Re: Lather II (Edited): Sink and Drain
Thank you!! The lack of indent was a stylistic choice but not one that I had particular feelings about; it just kind of happened. I'm not sure what you mean ...
May 4, 2015 -
Re: Lather
Wow, I am floored that you took the time to write this to me! This is exactly the kind of criticism I was looking for! Thank you so much for ...
May 4, 2015 -
Re: A(r)mor
I was trying to do a different take on the villanelle, but thank you! Yeah, I changed that line; I wasn't sure how I liked it anyway. Thanks for the ...
Mar 22, 2015 -
Re: Scenery
*checks* Hmm I could've sworn I saw it there, but it's gone now! >.< Either way, it deserves to be. I loved it, seriously, your diction's on point. (Also, agreed, ...
Mar 20, 2015
