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So much! It's perfect.

This was nice! Let me re-read it a few times and I'll get back to you with a thoughtful review.

*looks around, whispers* The secret is in the sauce.

PLEASE

Ooooh I'm gonna have to try that! Can I get your recipe? I have this great recipe for grilled nine year olds that you will ADORE. The chives really bring ...

Nutella goes great on 11 year olds. But the six year olds are a little crunchy for my taste.

That's so cool!! I've been dying to practice and get better, but my neighbor went off to college so now I have no one to sign with! Good luck with ...

I STILL LOVE IT I'd write a review but I can't find anything wrong with it. Gosh darn it, Deanie, stop being so perfect :P Keep writing!

IM HOOKED I LOVE THIS *READS FOREVER*

I'm glad you liked it!! That means so much to me ^-^ Be on the look-out for a full-fledged novel based on this.

Whoa calm down, TFIOS is untouchable. BUT THANK YOU FOR WARMING MY HEART AND CURLING MY SMILE. HAVE A GREAT DAY

I added descriptions! I'll add some pictures maybe?

Okay, I think the next chapter will have some character descriptions in there. Or maybe the first chapter. I'll work on that.

Oh my gosh, I totally forgot about descriptions! How did I manage that? I'm so clueless. Thanks for reminding me!

THANK YOU for clarification!!! I was totally not sure how to write that sentence. I'm planning on splitting up the chapters real soon, once the action starts. You've got a ...