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Re: Drums of War-Chapter 2-The Valley
Thanks mate! I'm thankful for people like you who are not afraid to tell others what you really think. It makes the things I write better. I plan to take ...
Jul 1, 2015 -
Re: Drums of War-Chapter 2-The Valley
I can fix that somehow, and you don't seem mean at all. I'm grateful you shared your honest opinion! How else can I make my writing the best it can ...
Jun 22, 2015 -
Re: A Deserate Situation ch. 2
I really enjoyed this. The writing style is very fluid and I really appreciate that. Also, the dialogue is wonderful. It flows very well, and is not clunky at all. ...
Jun 8, 2015 -
Re: Other Half
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Nov 30, 2014
A policeman came to our house a few weeks later telling us that they had found her body in a corn field a few streets away. He was a man ... -
Re: Drums of War-Aurora
Dang, thanks. Have I mentioned before how much I appreciate the people who actually comment? This website is way better than most! Thanks Cricket!
Nov 25, 2014 -
Re: Drums of War-Aurora
Thank you soooo much. This website is much better than others because people actually comment on your writing. I really Appreciate the feedback!
Nov 22, 2014 -
Re: Drums of War-Aurora
Thanks! One of the big things I am working on is spreading out the detail more. Thanks for reviewing!
Nov 20, 2014 -
Re: Ironclaw Chapter 1: Tale of the Coyote and Escaping the Cage
This is awesome. it reminds me of the Warriors series i read when I was younger, with more suspense and action. Flows pretty dang well, and overall pretty great. Nice ...
Nov 18, 2014
