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This is a very short chapter, and I didn't really understand what was going on. As for writing itself, I saw no spelling mistakes or typos. However I noticed that ...

I read this chapter only after I had read the third one. That was my mistake, I should have checked the chapter number. Anyway, as I said in my review ...

This was fantastic. Your writing style is captivating. You have a solid grasp of the English language. What I found most impressive about this piece is how smoothly the story ...

Hello there? Alright let’s get cracking. You have an excellent concept going on here. A girl who thinks she’s talking to her mind, but could actually be dealing with something ...

You certainly have potential. I like your story, but too many times you started your sentences with “I”, after a while I got a little annoyed by it. Perhaps you ...

Wow! Wow! Wow! A million times wow! Did I enjoy reading this or what! At no point was I aware that l was consuming ten A4 pages worth of material. ...

First things first, you’re punctuation’s tight, stood out like a fresh breeze; commas, periods, question marks in the right places; it made your story flow like smooth yoghurt. Conversations were ...

This is simply intriguing. Gum wrappers! Who would have thought that gum wrappers could shed any light on love. Really well written piece, I absolutely enjoyed reading it. Good Job. ...

Well hello. Let me begin simply by praising the flow of your sentences, your intelligent word play and overall grasp of the English language. You're a promising writer and with ...

What are sky dolphins? I must admit, in the beginning I thought Folie was a mouse especially after reading the part where she passed through a tiny duct and started ...

Absolutely true. A lot of what you said here is what I have experienced, your poem is a good portrait of life in general. well written piece sucked me in ...