Rosewood

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Wow, thank you so much! As for your question, I honestly don't know either. I guess you could interpret that way. Maybe he was just excited to "play". Maybe he ...

Thanks for answering my questions. And 1/3? I hadn't noticed! But, in that case, I'm really looking forward to parts 2 and 3!

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Thank you for your feedback! I originally had this in past tense, so there's a lot of mistakes in that area. As for the details when the car showed up, ...

Thanks! I fixed the mistakes.

Thank you for the feedback! I agree it should be 'waves', I was just was trying to make it rhyme. And for your numbers 2 and 3, thank you again ...

No, you%u2019re fine! Thanks!

Thank you so much, I see where I made a few errors. For some reason, (and I%u2019ve tried everything, including the return bar), it just won%u2019t make stanza breaks. Maybe ...

Hey, I just wanted to make this known that this is my first poem on this website. I enjoy reading poetry but have only written it a few times. Criticism ...

Thank you for the feedback, it did help. I definitely see where I could have written things better.

Thank you so much for the feedback! I'll be sure to fix my mistakes.

Thank you for the feedback! I'll be sure to fix my mistake.

I really love simple poems such as these. They contain few words that really carry the moral, plot, story, etc., but somehow make it work without being too... what's the ...

Thank you so much for the feedback! I was hoping it would seem like Addie was shifting her focus to Charlie in the end, but now that I'm rereading it, ...