RoseTulipLily

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Greetings! And happy Review Day! I apologize in advance if I ever repeat anything anyone else said in previous review or come across as nitpicky to you. With that being ...

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Greetings! And happy Review Day! I apologize in advance if I ever repeat anything anyone else said in previous review or come across as nitpicky to you. With that being ...

thanks for the review. I'm actually thinking of editing out the states rather than asked part. as for Lanelle's bittersweet comment about revenge, well more on that later because i ...

thanks for the review. i agree that the stepmother is typically a character who's stereotyped as evil so i made it my mission to make Lanelle like that. You're right ...

thanks for the review and really helpful advice

Thanks for reviewing. I will definitely keep your advice in mind :)

I doubt there's a single writer who does not add unnecessary words or skip words. I proofread my work thrice and yet I still find multiple errors there. It's a ...

Great, I'll take a look and review asap

I certainly intend to review again, just let me know when the next chapter is :)

Thank you :)

You're welcome and yeah that happens to every writer all the time

It's ultimately a matter of opinion for all readers but I think it is a good first impression

Oh and by the way "dread" can also be used as an adjective the same way "dreaded" can and don't apologize. I am grateful that you took the time to ...

Thanks again! ;)

Thanks for the advice. I'll be sure to make those revisions