RosePetal8965

I loved Honey it really stuck out to me. It was also really grabbed my attention when you said "She died before she made it to summer." I took me ...

I really loved your poem. There was some grammar issues though. One thing that you can do is instead of using the symbol & please use the word. No sunflowers ...

Right here at "Puff! The cloud shut it's lips on Celina.She" there is supposed to be a space in-between Celina and She. It was a good beginning on how you ...