RoseGryffindor

Beautiful poem. There are somethings you could change and add though. Since the person has already came into your life you need to make it past tense. Also, maybe you ...

I think it's quite clever what you did with the first stanza and then explaining/apologizing. Conveying a clear message of the narrator being confused because their head and heart are ...

Hello, This is really good but I think you're overdoing some things like using "fancy" words when normal words would work just, if not, better. It was very romantic and ...

Wow. It's simple but it conveys alot of emotion. The feeling someone has when their girlfreind/boyfriend has just broken up with them (or you broke up with them because you ...

It's me again! Ok, to start it was doing wonderfully until you got to the part where Aurilea helps give Beatra birth. There, it kinda rushes and isn't as shall ...

Hello! So I am going to grant your wish and comment on your story. Happy now? Ok, so overall it was really good. Ecspecially at the beginning you explained the ...