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Rose94

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Trapped

    Wow I like you you kept it very simple, it had a powerful affect. Your poem is amazing, I look forward to reading more of your work.

    Jul 6, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Invisible

    You're writing is pretty good overall though you may not want to be so repeative with certain word. Other than That it was very good.

    Jun 25, 2010


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