RoryLegend

Hello! Sorry it has taken me a while I forgot to check the "Will review for food" section. My bad. Okay, so onto the review. I have worked with you ...

Hello Maverick! You are one very new member! I love how you have that whole 2:1 ratio. Brownie points and snaps for you haha! You deserve 24 hours of good ...

I'm just going to come out and say it. The flashback did not confuse me at all, not even a bit. I knew exactly what was going on. Alright. I ...

Bwahahahaha! I freaking cannot get over how much I freaking love this freaking story! (Sorry i was seeing how many times I could say freaking in one sentence) Anyways. Wow. ...

Three words my friend: taste’a’vision HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! I freakind died at that part! Oh my gosh! This is hilarious. I read the first part, I think I remember commenting on it, ...

Hiya- So I am going to review this but it might seem a bit odd. The story confused me and I would like to help you out a bit. The ...

Hello, hiya, how are you? Lala, can I call you Lala? So you are relatively new, and I saw no one had reviews your story so I thought I would ...

Hullo! I must say I did enjoy this. I really did. I think it would be really funny to actually see. This kind of thing is hard to write and ...

Hell Hello there- How are you today? I'm Rory. It's hard to tell, but I have worked with script writing quite a bit. I just never post it because I ...

Yay first review in three months! Wow this piece was really good. I would love to hear more. The first three lines were really strong. They really hook the reader ...

Hmm, this was very interesting. There were just a few typos where a my should have be a me or an any should have been an an, but other than ...

Hello there and Welcome to the YWS. We seem to have a lot of new members lately its great! Here are some suggestions/rules: 1. Keep the review/posting ratio at a ...

Haha I quite enjoyed this. It was nice to read something different. You did a spot on job. The only teensy weensy thing I would do is just make it ...

Alright I am definatly interested. There were a few grammatical errors: Allowing her to relax she began to change. I think it should be: Allowing herSELF to relax and She ...

I need to be honest with you...I didn't read the whole thing. You really need to space out your paragraphs properly, otherwise it is wayyy to hard to read. If ...