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Thanks for the ideas, Falc! The open window thing might come into play later ;) Thanks for the review :D

ooh good catch on the teeth! Thanks for the review!

I think the summarization is fine after what I wrote last chapter. honestly I have a bad habit of not truly ending my chapters until the next chapter haha the ...

I think the summarization is fine after what I wrote last chapter. honestly I have a bad habit of not truly ending my chapters until the next chapter haha the ...

ugh this is from four years ago and I hate it now. how'd you even find it? I wouldn't call it satire but idk and I'm using "house" as a ...

oooh! I didn't pick up on that! The thing about focusing poems on the ineffable is it tends to quickly get way too abstract to keep anyone's attention very long. ...

Sorry that triple posted. Internet issues. And I wrote these replies on my phone, so pardon my spelling mistakes too.

This is a creative, informational, personal essay with the form of a hermit crab essay. Hermit crab essays take on the form of other things.. For example, my creative writing ...

This is a creative, informational, personal essay with the form of a hermit crab essay. Hermit crab essays take on the form of other things.. For example, my creative writing ...

This is a creative, informational, personal essay with the form of a hermit crab essay. Hermit crab essays take on the form of other things.. For example, my creative writing ...

Ooh those are some nice additions! I like the clarity you added. Awesome job!

not even kidding! Ivy's subplot is the cat and Grey's is breaking into places and stealing stuff for the fun of it haha

Thanks for the review! on the breaking-In thing, Grey is becoming a kleptomaniac in his spare time lol

Well this is a novel and these things will accumulate into something more later. This chapter isn't meant to stand alone as a plot :p Thanks for the review!

Thank you! This was really helpful. I inserted some things in the first paragraph and forgot to check the length. I'll definitely split it up. I did describe the alleyway ...