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  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Color of Pain

    Thanks for this review, Vivian. I was thinking of writing more about other senses, for example: The scent of sadness Is that of chrysanthemums on a child's grave.

    Sep 1, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Color of Pain

    Thanks for the review!

    Aug 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Color of Pain

    Thank you for the review!

    Aug 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Color of Pain

    Smile is one syllable? :o I didn't know that. But I meant for people who pronounce smile as one to be able to say force-ed instead or forced. Still *I* ...

    Aug 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Color of Pain

    I counted smile as two syllables, but I suppose it could be one and forced could be two :) Thank you for the review.

    Aug 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Bridge ~ Into the Night

    No I don't. Aside from completely deleting it and typing it by hand.

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fade to Gray

    Thanks XD

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fade to Gray

    Thanks for the review! I'll fix the caps.

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fade to Gray

    Thank you for this review and I'll change that comma thing.

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fade to Gray

    XD This was one of the poems that I just wrote. It has little deeper meaning and I apologize for that. What Ary said was kind of true, I was ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Suffocating

    Thanks for the review!

    Aug 21, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Suffocating

    Thank you for this review!

    Aug 21, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Suffocating

    Thanks!

    Aug 20, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Suffocating

    Thanks!

    Aug 20, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Suffocating

    Thank you!

    Aug 20, 2013


Anxiety is the dizziness of freedom.
— Søren Kierkegaard