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Re: The Color of Pain
Thanks for this review, Vivian. I was thinking of writing more about other senses, for example: The scent of sadness Is that of chrysanthemums on a child's grave.
Sep 1, 2013 -
Re: The Color of Pain
Thanks for the review!
Aug 27, 2013 -
Re: The Color of Pain
Thank you for the review!
Aug 27, 2013 -
Re: The Color of Pain
Smile is one syllable? :o I didn't know that. But I meant for people who pronounce smile as one to be able to say force-ed instead or forced. Still *I* ...
Aug 27, 2013 -
Re: The Color of Pain
I counted smile as two syllables, but I suppose it could be one and forced could be two :) Thank you for the review.
Aug 26, 2013 -
Re: The Bridge ~ Into the Night
No I don't. Aside from completely deleting it and typing it by hand.
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Fade to Gray
Thanks XD
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Fade to Gray
Thanks for the review! I'll fix the caps.
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Fade to Gray
Thank you for this review and I'll change that comma thing.
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Fade to Gray
XD This was one of the poems that I just wrote. It has little deeper meaning and I apologize for that. What Ary said was kind of true, I was ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Suffocating
Thanks for the review!
Aug 21, 2013 -
Re: Suffocating
Thank you for this review!
Aug 21, 2013 -
Re: Suffocating
Thanks!
Aug 20, 2013 -
Re: Suffocating
Thanks!
Aug 20, 2013 -
Re: Suffocating
Thank you!
Aug 20, 2013
