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"I don't know which one of you wrote the last stanza" am I more than one person now?

oh the workshop basically was the final draft. I guess I might include this in my end of semester portfolio? That's not for a while. But "marinating" never seems to ...

Half of them got it, half didn't. I think I'm so wirried about being heavy handed because my teacher kept praising my subtlety. He got that it was a tree ...

Thank you for your excellent review! I was wondering if you picked up that the speaker was a tree? And if you didn't does that seem like constraint enough for ...

Hmm! Thank you for the thoughtful reply and the questions! I see I read your original review a little differently than you'd intended. Guess that's what I get for reading ...

You had it right at first. Just a boy. his mouth is welded shut because he has something he wants to say but can't, knowhatimean? :)

I thought at least my word choice was pretty straightforward, relying primarily on monosyllabic words with mostly concrete meanings (curb, tree, bikes, etc.). And the surface meaning didn't seem too ...

any suggestions on how to convey all this info without boring readers and having talking head syndrome?

I love you and I love your poetry

I don't think it counted as a review either time because there wasn't enough in the review ;) thanks for you compliments though!

I'm a little confused as to where you're confused, so I'll try to clear it up for you so you can clear it up for me as to where I ...

"still, sunbeam creases always fade" maybe? thanks for the review!

baby don't hurt me

you're not supposed to know about there being a volcano >:[ I wouldn't have told you if I thought you were gonna read this lol It's kind of obvious when ...

actually, wait, no, he has to be seventeen. I'd forgotten why I did that and have been thinking of him as eighteenish in my head this whole book, not that ...