Ronnok

Hey. I like your story alot. The splitting headache and blood boiling beneath her skin...and her being unable to keep up with sword skills. I think i know where this ...

Once again brilliant. I am beginning to envy your slower but more intense writing style. I agree with much of what Bickazor has said in his very long and thorough ...

Hey. What little there was to critique has been critiqued already. I just have to say that YES you should continue this. You give a crystal clear view of the ...

Hi. Its very intriguing. My need to know what happens next continued to build through the whole chapter. I don't know what it's about but i love the way you ...