Romania

I enjoyed this poem. In my perspective the narrator was probably drunk and the homeowner was his/her wife coming home and finding all the beer gone. Your rythmes had a ...

I enjoyed the message but it could have used more imagery on what the eyes actually make the narrator feel. Plus more emphasis on how the loves eyes differ from ...

Fairly realistic with good imagery. I do think that it would make more sense as a flashback to a fear rather than a childs view at this very present, just ...