RokitaVivi

Thank you Lipton for your helpful review and what to improve :D. Don't worry I won't go on tirade and hunt you down with a pitchfork, that wouldn't solve anything ...

Hiya, thank you once again for the review :D! When you pointed out the first problem (keep my times straight), I start to notice it and wondered how I overlooked ...

Oh dear... I think Elias would be a better male name. I think you did mention something like that for German. Sorry, I'm a bit tired at the time of ...

I'm glad you like part one of the first chapter (so far) and took the time do make a review. It is an improvement over the prologue. Apologies for not ...

Admittedly this was my first time doing an ongoing story and this prologue is a real piece of work. So many grammar errors @.@ You mention the German is off ...

Here are the translation notes for chapter two!! :D mein Sternlicht (German) - my starlight mon Soleil (French) - my sun C’est la vie (French) - such is life Manger ...

Hi Ravena, thank you again for the review! :D Not gonna lie, the haunting visions and isolation sounds like a good idea and lines up perfectly with gothic. The plot ...

I thought that you hate :/. But it's more of a novella than an actual novel. Thank you for assuring me, I'll try to keep writing until the story ends ...

Believe it or not, Lawrence being remarried was something I was going to talk about in the next chapter... not to mention a very awkward one 'XD The couple hours ...

Hello again! :D To be fair, with the prologue and chapter one I was feeling it around XD. Honestly Rosalie partially ranting about Marie out of frustration is not a ...

Admittedly this was my first time doing a longer story and I didn't want to drag the prologue longer than it should%uD83D%uDE05. I'm sure I could have written it a ...

Hi Raven, it's Rokita! I want to say thank you for taking time out of your day to read and write a review for part 1 of chapter 1, thoughts ...

@EliseLemke Emotionally speaking, I do think a slower pace helps. I won't spoil who the veiled woman is, as its too early to reveal that until part 2. But I ...

Hi RatHat! I just want to say thank you for your lovely and helpful review :) I try not to make this chapter and story overtly detailed, otherwise the reader ...

No problem:)