Rohit123

I think my favorite part was "Hey, everybody, and welcome to youngwritersociety.com! I'm your host, voice in your head, and I'm with a guest speaker, your mouth. Today, we'll be ...

Thank you for reviewing! This review really put a smile on my face. I agree with everything you said, especially using necessities instead of necessaries and "Staring at me with ...

Thank you for giving such a detailed review! I think the dialogues are a bit confusing without being joined too, so I'll try to fix that. Your review helped me ...

Thank you so much for reviewing! I admit the story was a bit confusing, but hey! It was my first time writing a longer story. I'm really glad you liked ...

Thank you so much for reviewing my story Mailice! I completely agree that it was a bit rushed. It was my first time writing a longer story and I was ...

"Damn my wife and her cooking," he muttered This part is really funny but I don’t understand why he’s blaming his wife. He should be blaming himself for eating all ...

Hi, no I only posted once. Not sure why it shows twice.

I really enjoyed the whoopee cushion scene, it was quite funny. Another thing I really enjoyed was that instead of directly revealing how Margot found the shock pen, you imply ...