RobynTheWriter827

Thank you. I didn't actually know hat using '' was more professional, but at least I know now. Thanks for your review, I don't mind the nitpicking!

Thank you! I will make the changes you have suggested. Although this seems like a very black and white religious story, this is just the beginning and I do have ...

You're welcome! I'm definitely looking forward to more poetry.

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I liked this chapter, as it was full of suspense that kept me reading. The creepy details such as the blood made it more horrifying. Sometimes it's the small details ...