Robusto

Not the usual style of writing that is so commonly seen here, but entertaining nonetheless. The facts, while not very detailed, did provide enough information to carry the reader onto ...

With a story that's all dialogue, you leave all interpretation of the story to the reader. The character's appearance, the setting, and even some of the characterization. Despite the challenges ...

Since this is only chapter 1, I'm going to assume that the story will either continue from another characters POV, or the main character isn't dead. The casual but serious ...

A perfect example of what the world would be like with the inclusion of robots. People would expect them to not be able to think or develop their own thoughts. ...

An interesting twist on a familiar premise. I hope to see more to this someday. I was a bit interested by how at first, it's the main characters friend who ...

This story has great potential. The exposition was well thought, and wasn't so drawn out as to cause a reader to immediately look for another story. The main character is ...

An excellent story. I find the historical accuracy of it astounding. The rivalry between Athens and Sparta is evident in the text, and the story itself is written very fluently ...