Roal

Hello there, the name's Roal, and I'll be tending to review your first chapter of Adiston Drive today. First of all, I don't detect any obvious grammatical error (or maybe ...

Before I start, can I ask you something? Is this a children's book? It sounds like a book for children, a good old fairy tale parents would read to their ...

Hello! Roal is here to review :] What I thought was funny because I actually made a story about boxing too xD... well it's kind of MMA but yeah. RED ...

Hello there Michelle! I'm here to write stuff about your story :3 First off, put it in story mode, it'll make it better to read rather than it being to ...

Hello there! Roal is here to do something! from the knife that we killed that hoe who was showing? If you're talking about the term "prostitute" then it should be ...

Hey, it's Roal and I'm here to... write stuff... :P Dad slapped me for telling him it was my 15th birthday when he was gutting his fish. I only remember ...

I'm here to review!! ^-^ First of all... I didn't get it... second... it was short... very very short. I'm suspecting Ard Ri* is... a name/last name? Of a rich/ruler's ...

Hello! I'm here to do stuff 8D! Is it me or there was that certain song that kept on repeating itself when I was reading this? Hmm... :l I did ...

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Hello! I am here to... review... kind of ._. Well... since Natsworthy already did the grammar, I don't see any mistakes ( with my nearly blind eyes ) in your ...

Hi 8D I'm here to... say stuff :o Right now, I like it. I haven't seen stories about the moon for quite sometimes. Probably cause I haven't read a book ...

Hello I am here to... do stuff... .-. Anyway, I know that your going to add it later on, but for this piece, it's like a prologue. Since you are ...

I found it very hilarious! xD Yes... like everyone else said, your grammar was... not good. I have to say... it's worst than mine D: I don't know if you ...

Hello! =^.^= I'm here to review 8D I was actually happy that it was short since long short stories kind of hurt my eyes. Anyway, I actually didn't understand the ...

An abandoned prison gets kind of creepy especially when a psychopathic person lived there. I was making my personal poison , it was called insta kill. What I mixed was ...