Riveneye

Oh boy I'm here with the review you asked for. I'm gonna have a really tough time reviewing this. You did a pretty good job on this one with errors. ...

Okay so I've made it a personal goal to review every one of you poems Nick. So this one will be my next victim. I'll put errors in red font ...

Well since you didn't get that many reviews I'll give one to polish this thing to perfection. I love the poem by the way kinda sets morals like integrity and ...

Alright I'm first. Well first off I really like this poem especially since I was ready over your shoulder as you were typing it at my house. So while it's ...

Okay nic I'll give this thing a review. Well first off I really liked this especially the last phrase. Though like all of your poems they are really cryptic. But ...

First off welcome Nick. Glad to see you followed my advice and joined. If you need any help you know where I live. Anyway about your poem. I really love ...

Hey Emmy Here's my review for you. My comments are underneath the paragraph words with errors are in red. Some might say he was handsome, gorgeous even, but when his ...

I loved this story. The detail was good, there wasn't many grammatical errors that haven't been mentioned. And like cherry said you need to be very careful of repetivness unless ...