RituparnaBhowmik

thank you for this review, i hope i performed better in my latest poem estrangement from desires.

thank you for this review... i will take care of the points you suggested.

thank you so much for reading and reviewing my poem thoroughly. i tried to fix a few points that you suggested and your nitpicks were a true help

nice poem, though i feel a hint of regret being in that winning team u refer....

sounds well to me, keep writing

Is it really a poem, just opening it i gave a wide mouth wow... and anyway what is a slam poem that you mentioned in the short description. please categorize ...

thank you for the review, and i did correct some grammatical errors, if you still spot some please let me know. and the humming bird's excuse is just an instance ...

thank you for the review, i would definitely make corrections

i really think you massively misunderstood my poem, here it is an irony in each phrase i use, the theme of my poem is focusing on the miseries of present ...

thank you

thank you ...

i request please suggest what is lacking i will certainly try to introduce it. and yes i mean "give " by gift - i just wanted to make the word ...

thank you so much for this appreciation and actually as i got here i thought of trying new writing skills so i am mostly experimenting. and thank you for the ...

for the message of my poem i intend to portray what are the obstacles we face in our way to success while some of they are self made other some ...

this was my first attempt at satire and i would certainly try improving. thank you