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Rithika

  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Regret Opens a Museum

    Wow, this one really stayed with me 🥹 Opening with "Regret opened a museum with only one exhibit per room" is such a clever setup. It turns something abstract into ...

    12h ago
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: Gravity Falls in Love

    Okay, this is so beautiful 🥹 "Gravity loved the moon and never once said so" is such a perfect opening line. It sets up this quiet, aching kind of love ...

    12h ago
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Gods word

    This is such a hopeful read 🥹 I love the contrast in the opening, singing and dancing while frowning all the while, because it captures hiding pain behind a smile ...

    12h ago
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Last thoughts from before

    Ooh, this is gorgeous 🥹 The moon holding all the prana your soul needed is such a fresh, unusual image, and I love the pull toward pallor and less breath, ...

    12h ago
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Will you be the moon?

    Aww, this one is so sweet 🥹🌙 I love how the speaker doesn't need to be loved back, just being the one who watches the moon all night is enough. ...

    13h ago
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Your eyes were everything

    Loved this one. "You were never mine, but somehow" is such a quiet gut punch of an opening. The tide and ticking clock images are my favorite part, and that ...

    13h ago


The most difficult thing in the world is to know how to do a thing and to watch somebody else doing it wrong, without comment.
— T. H. White