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Re: Revenge
Woah Mate! skylnn, Good work. Poem is simple. Feelings are strong. Starting of your poem is good. "YOU CALLED ME A LOSER" Punch in a face! Great. "You pushed me ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Occitanie - Brief recollection
Hi Silberfee, I start reviewing this piece with the title of your poetry. Nice job, good choice of title. For some people it is a bit scary title because hardly ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: a honest reply
hi Ladylizzlovelace, It is great to read this piece of work. I respect the feelings of Women. They are really passing a tough phase. Albeit through your work I sensed ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: A Night Sky
Mate ! Concept is good. But poem is not first rate. It is not a good poetry. English is a flaw in itself, and if you can't use words properly ...
Jun 24, 2017 -
Re: I'm a bad person
Well! It is a well-bred balladry. My main concern is not to add more pessimistic approach in your poem. Shoe some optimism. Albeit, the title of this poem explained it ...
Jun 24, 2017
