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  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Revenge

    Woah Mate! skylnn, Good work. Poem is simple. Feelings are strong. Starting of your poem is good. "YOU CALLED ME A LOSER" Punch in a face! Great. "You pushed me ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Occitanie - Brief recollection

    Hi Silberfee, I start reviewing this piece with the title of your poetry. Nice job, good choice of title. For some people it is a bit scary title because hardly ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: a honest reply

    hi Ladylizzlovelace, It is great to read this piece of work. I respect the feelings of Women. They are really passing a tough phase. Albeit through your work I sensed ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Night Sky

    Mate ! Concept is good. But poem is not first rate. It is not a good poetry. English is a flaw in itself, and if you can't use words properly ...

    Jun 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I'm a bad person

    Well! It is a well-bred balladry. My main concern is not to add more pessimistic approach in your poem. Shoe some optimism. Albeit, the title of this poem explained it ...

    Jun 24, 2017


Sometimes poetry is inspired by the conversation entered into by reading other poems.
— John Barton