Rigel

I am done, Life has abandoned me. Now, I am alone. You don't need all of that. It's redundant. I think that "Now I am alone" would suffice as a ...

My first thought was an Ankh, but that didn't seem as epic as you intended. It has a very nice non-rhyming flow. I enjoyed reading it. It was fun. My ...

"I don't write to impress, Just to merely express; Like the orient. " I get it! But the reference doesn't make as much sense as you'd like it to. Ideas ...

Ah, poetry. Art with words. I love things like this that grab the English language by the tongue and pull as hard as they can. Brilliance is rare, but I ...

I loved the line Consider me eccentric please. No one here knows me at all. I was confused by the rhyme-no rhyme at first, but now I like how it ...

I dunno. I understood it fine without punctuation. Some of the rhymes were cliche or forced(So she never said it back/And her love for him he forever lacked), but I ...

I agree. Only wanting people who will give you a rave review to read your work is childish. The only way people will read your work is if they like ...

I definitely think that questions belong in poetry, answered or not. I do not think that that is the issue here. The issue is that all these questions have been ...

What you've done here is you've written a mediocre three-stanza poem and a great two-stanza poem. Repetition like this is bad (especially when you're rhyming two -ght words, which are ...

This was nice. It was short, but sweet. (chuckle) As always, there were a few little annoying things. "My heart felt like it would burst from my chest" is so ...

Edit: A-HA! I finally get this! It took me a while, but I finally got what it means. This is nice. This is really good, or at least some parts ...

First off, I want to say that just because you say that something is confusing in the beginning, it doesn't make it any less confusing. Beyond that, it seems like ...

melody and harmony, warp and weft; waiting, just waiting I got chills when I read that. I'm a sucker for good alliteration. I normally shy away from formless poetry, but ...

This made me give a little giggle of joy, because I like the character of it so much. I love anything with a unique feel, and this is nothing if ...

Edit: Sorry, that came off unintentionally and uncharacteristically cold and hostile. What I meant was that I agree with Flemzo, and I think that more thought could have gone towards ...