RiaBaby

I don't even know how I can review this because after reading that, anything I say will sound weak and stupid. Superb, superb writing; I mean, wow. Beautifully told, I ...

Hello! I just want to tell you first that I haven't been on this site in a very long time, and your poem is the first thing I've read upon ...

Let me just start by saying I do like your writing, specifically your choice of words. However, I found this poem to be slightly contradictory, and a little confusing. I'm ...

That was exceptionally beautiful. I can't find any mistakes whatsoever, whether that be spelling, or grammar, or just general sentence structure--it all flowed very smoothly. I really, really enjoyed

I knew what he meant . “I wanted to check it out.”. I would ditch the comma here and just put a period. I tried to ignore the burning hole ...

i forget where it was, but there's a part where you had a little "i agree" in there, and i think you should really take that out, because it's too ...

Faith or religion is like Stars. There are a lot of them, And they have varrying numbers of planets, But in the end, They're all the same. Truer words were ...

screw what everybody else said--I think you're a fucking genius. God, this was so amazing. Not even amazing, because I don't think that word does it justice. I can't even ...

Part of me wants to jump and shout, ‘help! Help him!’ while the other protests, see what happens. It turns out, I follow the latter. I think you should have ...

We lost the game; they found me. I think this might be the most powerful sentence in the whole story. I really liked this, and must echo everybody else by ...