RhaniGrace

You've done well writing this piece after experiencing such a thing, you've expressed your emotions well. Overall a confronting, powerful and beautiful poem for your friend.

I really like the simplicity of your lyrics, they're innocent and expressive. You can gradually develop it as you grow and have new ideas, a good start.

A powerful piece. I think the title suits perfectly, seeking strength, lacking it and gaining it.

This is amazing, frightening and beautiful. You've captured birth, fear and life perfectly and you're descriptions create a fantastic imagery when read. just beautiful.

Wow! wonderfully creepy. The way in which you politely portray what I perceive as control or perhaps abuse is fantastic.