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Re: .
It's been a while since I've seen a poet open up, especially like this. You have some spelling mistakes but you will find them and fix them, I know this ...
Apr 2, 2009 -
Re: Brains
Anything you have ever written is readable. That is how I describe this. I disagree with the name. Only because... Brains? Defend the title! Also, I cant say I like ...
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: The House
[quote="Griffinkeeper"][quote="Reyu"]Boring. 60 seconds I'll never get back. You can at least pride yourself on the fact that it is written well enough to read :)[/quote] So you thought it was ...
Feb 11, 2008 -
Re: A Turning
Um, regular people suck. Why would I ever want to write something for those sods? You write something for me to enjoy, then maybe I will consider writing an ode ...
Nov 26, 2007 -
Re: Poem of a Silent Violin
I thought this was amazing. If I could nit pick, the only thing that comes to mind is that it might have been to long. I have no useful information ...
Nov 1, 2007 -
Re: Peace and Hope
First, peace is but a break within the war, A single jewel washed up on the beach; It is seen burning bright in every star Flip it around methinks. And ...
Oct 29, 2007 -
Re: Sex Cells
I do not comment on a lot of poetry (or anything else for that matter) but this requires my attention :) I hate it. I love the name. "I, quiver ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: When Writers are no Longer Needed (Chapter one part one)
I started this about two or three years ago and I'm considering re-writing the two chapters that I have and adding a few more but I'd like to see if ...
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: Thursday
Earlier today, I chose a seat near the front of the bus and placed my bag beside me. Then I remembered that it was Thursday and there was no need ...
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: The Last Prophet
For Jennafina I am dead. My execution is tomorrow and I know what to expect. My hands will be tied and I will be hooked to a wagon, where I ...
Aug 27, 2007 -
Re: Mr Pailey and his Adventures Through Time
This is the beginning of Claire and mine's second joint novel. The rest of chapter one will be posted when we've written it... Chapter One Mr Pailey looked upon his ...
Aug 4, 2007 -
Re: Who Art Thou
Who Art Thou? Who art thou that prowls passageways at dusk? Garbed in a white gown with white slippered feet. No trace left at dawn but a perfumed musk Of ...
Aug 4, 2007 -
Re: To John Donne
John Donne... :roll: That aside, very cool and made me chuckle 8)
Aug 3, 2007 -
Re: The Unicorn Killers - Old, decrepit first draft thingy
So, all I can see is: Will and when will we be seeing more? :o I've been looking forward to it for a while now. I concur!
Jul 29, 2007 -
Re: The Queen of Dolls
Er... not published yet. Too lazy to be published, sadly, lol. But I have finished a novel and am looking for an agent. Novel? Since when? Email me a chapter? ...
Jun 3, 2007
