Rey

I like the use of metaphors in your poem. It adds to its depth. What I would suggest is the use of punctuation marks in order to separate your thoughts. ...

Whoa man! Seems like who have a rough business with this "brilliant girl." It reminds me of Alison De Laurentis in pretty little liars. She seems like a manipulative person. ...

I liked your basic idea, the theme of this poem. We generally just make plans instead of acting upon them. Your poem has focused on that part of human nature ...